Five Card Story: The Hidden Heaven

stories: prev | random | next

a Five Card Flickr story by Aryanna created Oct 09 2014, 12:16:09 pm. Create a new one!


flickr photo credits: (1) bionicteaching (2) bionicteaching (3) bionicteaching (4) Serenae (5) bionicteaching


about this story

We were walking down the long, narrow road where the further we got on our journey, the darker it was. We were out looking for the place that Stevie had claimed to see last week. He claims that it was the most amazing thing he had ever seen. There were signs all over the place. One pointing right, another saying hate greed. What was their relevance? There were no buildings around, and there was no place to go but forward. Dismissing it, we continue walking but with every step, we continue to get more and more lost. "I want to get there so i can find all the money in the world and become rich!" Max said. Wow greedy much? Steve never said any thing about money. We keep walking forward when we come to a dead end. "This road led absolutely nowhere!" Sarah wailed. but then i remembered."Hate Greedy" "Turn right" This is why we were getting nowhere. "Max stop being greedy" "But why?" "money isnt everything ok? at least you got to come on this adventure with your family." "Youre right im sorry." "Now Follow me," i said, turning right. "Where are you going? There is no path over here!?" Sarah yelled. "Trust me. i know what im doing." After walking for about five minutes, we come to this tiny little shack. it completely stopped us in our tracks, distracting us from our objective. we ran up and looked what was inside, but we saw nothing. it seemed empty, though, so almost as if it were an instinct, we went inside. There was a manhole on the floor that looked intriguing. we decided to go in. as we kept walking underground, we found a door. we opened it and stepped out to see what stevie was talking about. It wasnt a house, or an arcade, or even a castle. it was a hidden heaven that was meant for people who were able to open their eyes, their minds, there hearts , and listen. The field went on for miles. the sunlight was endless. this truly was the most incredible thing ive ever seen. We are never going back.

share this story

permalink to story: http://5card.cogdogblog.com/show.php?id=35393

Copy/Paste Story

Click once to select, then copy and paste HTML to your own blog/website.

create a different story from these same cards

Do you have another interpretation of the story behind these pictures? Add it to the collection as a new story!


flickr photo credits: (1) bionicteaching (2) bionicteaching (3) bionicteaching (4) Serenae (5) bionicteaching

For security purposes, please enter the correct words matching the images (blame the spammers):

stories: prev | random | next