Five Card Story: haunt

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something is ready to burst

you must be a ghost
because you follow me
from dawn til dusk
your echoed laugh
embedded, backtracked
in a playlist of chill vibes
or that spectral smile
that i'm reminded of
every time i see
a cat i'd think you'd like

this is no residual haunting
it's intelligent, alright
with no sign of going away
no sign of turning back

but i wonder
when you're at the top
of Iroquois mountain
if you feel a vision of me
following you closely
toward the white caps

there may be a lot of silence
but i hope you know that
you're not completely alone

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<hr /><h2><a href="http://5card.cogdogblog.com/show.php?id=40237">Five Card Story: haunt</a></h2>a <a href="http://5card.cogdogblog.com/show.php?suit=netnarr">Networked Narratives</a> story created by stryii
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something is ready to burst 
 
you must be a ghost 
because you follow me 
from dawn til dusk 
your echoed laugh 
embedded, backtracked 
in a playlist of chill vibes 
or that spectral smile 
that i'm reminded of 
every time i see 
a cat i'd think you'd like 
 
this is no residual haunting 
it's intelligent, alright 
with no sign of going away 
no sign of turning back 
 
but i wonder 
when you're at the top 
of Iroquois mountain 
if you feel a vision of me 
following you closely 
toward the white caps 
 
there may be a lot of silence 
but i hope you know that 
you're not completely alone 

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