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I remember that sunset, it wasn't a colorful one, it was cloudy and I could barely see the sun but some sunbeams went through spots between every cloud. After that sunset, a telephone booth, which is in the main street in the town where I lived, came to my mind. I think I'm on my way back home because I can Mr.Gomez's house that is the next place after the telephone booth. I loved walking back home from school, every time I walked in front of Mr.Gomez's house he and I chatted a bit, he is a great man. Right now I'm confused because I'm having a flashback to my childhood, my cousins and I are getting down from a big rock we had climbed. Suddenly, I can see my house, I can see mum and dad, my sister and dog through but they are crying. Why are they crying?? I'll go inside and see what's going on. Wait, what has just happened?? I've just traversed the door. Mum, dad can you hear me?? I can't touch them, none of them, neither my parents, my sister nor my dog. Wait, everything is becoming white, why is everything white?? Now, I see the same sunset again. I can't see myself, I can't see anything but that sunset. The last thing I remember is... I was laying on the road, and ambulance was attending me. A few moments later, I could only see the sunset.

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