Five Card Story: And the bullet crashed into my chest

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Everybody could think I was crazy, but I used to go swimming in winter. I loved it because no one can bother me.

I found myself in the middle of the beach.

Taking a deep breath, I decided to dive into the sea. Bad idea, there were many rocks.

-Help! – I shouted.

Nobody heard me but I insisted.

-HELP! Can anyone hear me?

I was alone. I was bleeding and my arm seemed clearly broken.

Luckily, I was able to arrive to the seashore and get out of the water. Then, I started walking through town looking for some help, but I was not as bad as I thought. I could move the arm properly and that was nice.

Nevertheless, it was strange. Never before had I seen this. Streets were totally empty. The situation was frightening and it was also funny because, for the first time, I could appreciate the stunning view of the winter. Those trees, the bright moon in the sky and all that snow made my journey more pleasant.

Finally, I ran fast to my house to treat my injuries. Accidentally, I pricked my finger with a rose, but, then again, I did not feel any pain.
Suddenly, a memory came out of my mind. I realised I had been died all this time.

You killed me when you read the tittle of this story.

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