Five Card Story: Coakroach Murder

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a Five Card Flickr story by Justin Cook created Oct 16 2012, 11:30:58 pm. Create a new one!


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Once upon a time there was a great dectetive, best in the buisness because he was never seen and nobody suspected him to be a dectetive. His name is Swiggles Slime, and yes he is a worm about the size of your palm. This case was a very special case because someone was murdered in a dark room with only a bit of light shining onto a white chair and a rose red sofa. the blood on the sofa was on the sofa since 9:38 at night on the nineteenth of July in the year of 2239. There only clue leading to the murder so far was a telescope from the great clocktowershowing through the crack in the window to the murder room. There was only one suspect that Swiggles could think of, the great orange coakroach, Sneaky Sam. Swigles was positive that Sneaky would have moved back to his home country, Australlia so they had to go there and get him taken to jail.

While at the airport Wiggles caught up with his old university mate Slinky the snail who was also a great detective. He said he was also after Sneaky but for a different crime so they decide they were going to team up to catch the murderer.

when they finally got to Australlia the had to find there way around the whole entire place, which for a worm and a snail is pretty long. It took them 1 whole day before they finally reached Melbourne, but even then they weren't finished because there was a massive line of stairs made of dirt, they tried to find the top of it but asll they saw was smaller stairs going up, then more and more and more, getting smaller and smaller until finally you could only see the bright blue sky with nothing else to be seen. When they had been an hour and they weren't even an eighth of the way there, a kind pedestrian saw that they were on there way to the top and picked them up gently and gave them a 2 minute lift to the top when he then gently placed them down on a beautiful green leaf at the side of the path. They thought they were never going to see the top, but no time to think about it cause straight ahead of them was a small cave obviously leading to Sneaky, they ended up getting him out of the cave (a little thing the learnt in detective school) and sent him to jail.

That is how the world was saved by a snail and a worm.

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