Five Card Story: As You Said, I am No One

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a Five Card Flickr story by Kate created Nov 21 2013, 05:13:24 pm. Create a new one!

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He walks over to find my file once more and comes back with the look of disappointment on his face. I don't think he has the patience to question me again. "You have no files, records, nothing. You are nobody. You don't exist." He says bitterly. "Who are you?" He asked both sourly and loudly. I shrugged and replied "As you said, I am no one." There was a pause "May I go now?" He was about to blow a fuse. I simply stood up and left. Not that people noticed or cared. As they said, I am no one. I walked down the dark tunnel hardly able to see my dirty bare feet. 'Maybe I should give myself a name.' I think to myself. 'No. Nobody would care who I am. They will always refer to me as that mad, dirty, lost girl.' I don't think they have the right to judge me. They don't know me. But as they judge me, I remain as they say, no one. I look out on the lake wondering how cold it is. Do i want to know how cold it is. Maybe the water will take away the pain. Everyone just glances over at me. Nobody cares about the no one. I simply walk off the cliff. When I hit the water it's piercing cold. I like the cold. I open my eyes, all I see is black. 'The black has swallowed me' I think. I surface. Maybe I am a little mad.

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