Five Card Story: The Haunted Day

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a Five Card Flickr story by hockeygal4 created Nov 21 2013, 05:17:07 pm. Create a new one!

flickr photo credits: (1) Intrepidteacher (2) bionicteaching (3) Serenae (4) bionicteaching (5) Serenae

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BANG! The door slams hard behind me. I creep slowly into The House of Murder. Don't you hate it when the house is so quiet it is very loud. Like a song i've listened to a billion times one of the lines is "I've never heard silence quite this loud" that line plays a role in my life everything is always quiet right to the point where you could hear every groan and creak of the building. Quite freaky but I live a life of freaky. Anyway I walk in and hear something chattering a chattering I know all to well. The chattering of bone against bone. A corps. I silence it and then free its spirit. I look up to see a wall covered in papers that look very, very old. One hundred years almost. I blink and blood red letters show up "KEEP OUT!" I've learned from experience that when a sign says to keep out, always go in, always. I lean against the wall, a door pops open, as I expected would happen. I enter what looks like a temple with a huge entry way and a clouded sky. "A new world" and its in black and white. I look at the riddle that tells me what to do. " At the wall that has many words walk on through. On the flip side there isn't much colour but walk to the place unlike any other....
"The clock it has crazy designs unlike any other. I have to go to it. But how. i search the building. there it is a ladder just what i was looking for. i climb up the never ending rusty terror up to the clock. riddle "dive on in to a different wonder fix the mistake that many miss and you will revel a paradise bliss" I open up the clock. to reveal gears set up perfectly except for one . " the mistake that everyone misses of cource thank you mom for making me take machanicle classes i fix it up and i hear the turning of gears and then a bright light shoots out of the clock. the black and white world changes into a perfect paradise. at last im out of the world of riddles

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