Five Card Story: Flashes of the End

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a Five Card Flickr story by Bachoi created Sep 24 2019, 08:13:25 pm. Create a new one!

flickr photo credits: (1) bionicteaching (2) krutscjo (3) Serenae (4) Serenae (5) bionicteaching

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Now that its all over, all that remains are flashes. Picturesque moments followed by more of the fog. It had been a normal day, I swear! it was a normal day, and I was walking. I didn't notice anything different. traffic was normal, nothing smelled different... the next thing I knew I was in a trunk. I didn't see their faces. Once, I had watched a John Mulaney skit about kicking out the brake lights and waving around if you are kidnapped. god, I miss when that was just a comedy routine for me. I kicked out the light, i cut my foot up doing it. When I looked out from the dark trunk I saw a rail crossing, and then I felt a bump. My body hurt, and i only just noticed. my ribs burned and it hurt to breathe. my throat ached like I had choked. i was out of breath from kicking out the light. I think I passed out then? I didn't recognize the intersection o got a glimpse of next, but it seemed like it was a different time of day? I couldn't read the bus stops. the smell of traffic was stifling. I watched and tried to wave. I was... so hecking scared. before much longer we stopped. time gets fuzzy as they opened the trunk and dragged me out. i see flashed of colour doors inside. I was taken into one of the rooms... i think there were other people like me in the other rooms. i could hear someone crying. i started crying. i had to use the bathroom. i was hungry. it had been a while, i think. when they came into the room, they wore masks, bandanas. they set down a glass with a foul-smelling liquid. i didn't want to drink it, it seemed gross. i was told it was food, but i didn't want to drink it. i really really didnt. they made me, and then i went out again. i didn't wake up again until i was found, i woke up in a pile of footballs to the police raiding the warehouse. ive been in the hospital recovering from the poison for weeks now, ive started to come to terms with what happened. It had been such a normal day. i dont know if i will have a normal day ever again.

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