Five Card Story: Was the Mystery Ever Solved ?

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a Five Card Flickr story by Erin Lopez created Jul 11 2020, 02:18:47 am. Create a new one!

flickr photo credits: (1) bionicteaching (2) cogdogblog (3) bionicteaching (4) bionicteaching (5) Serenae

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setting - summer camp year 2026
characters - suzie , lucy , johnny
conflict: campers are going missing

Rising action:
Second week of camp and something is not right , three of the camp counslers notice the mess hall was looking short on campers. After a search of the cabins and the camp grounds, they decided to do an extended search before involving authorities. when it was time for their shifts to change they began their search , just to stumble upon some land they didn't know was there.

This land was behind the campgrounds at least 5 mi from any actual civilation. As they explore the area more, johnny then stumble over these unmarked graves. The unmarked graves were so small , small enough to fit a child. In the far distance they see a house a really old house. suzie and lucy are freaking out wanting to call the cops but johnny says no lets go check out the house first.

Falling action :
As they get closer to the house they realize it's a very old church. They split up and begin to look around. Windows were covered up but they can see light coming through the cracks. Suzie runs around she's bugged out and in shock, she finds lucy and johnny. She's out of breath and looks like she's just seen a gohst.

Johnny and lucy try to get suzie to calm down so they can understand what she was trying to say. suzie finally stops and takes a deep breath."I hear chanting and screaming " she says. When they reach the side of the house where suzie was they see what they beleive is a storm cellar door. As they get closer the screams get louder , and louder and louder. They run to the door rip it open and find a tape recorded replaying the sounds of children's screams. They stand to look around to see if anyone was coming and there was the missing kids , they get closer,and closer and then BOOM now lucy , suzie and JOhnny are in the cellar.

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