Five Card Story: the evil church

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Once upon a time there was an evil church. It was a cold fall day. We were doing our annual parade when everything went wrong. Until I heard a ¨BANG¨, the noise flashed before my eyes, as I opened my eyes after that blink, everything and everyone was gone. The only thing that was facing me was that church, just looking at it gave me chills. I didn't know what to do so I screamed ¨HELLO?!¨…. Nothing was said. It was 2 hours and I was just sitting there watching that church. It was weird, it was like I couldn't take my eyes off of it. Several minutes past until one blink, everything was back to normal. Everyone was there, that same old street light that flashes. Everything was fine, but it was dark outside. I thought to myself ¨was I in that dimension for that long?¨ I would have thought my mom would be worried, but I was standing there until I felt someone touch my shoulder. I was my mom, she never asked where I was or what happened to me she just gave me a hug. I tried telling her what happened but she didn't believe me, she looked at me like I was crazy. I knew what I was talking about and you can never tell someone something that is unbelievable until you see it, I didn't think much of it so I left it alone. The next day I was walking to school, but on the way there is passes that church, you know something is wrong when your hair on your arm rises and you get that cold feeling, yes I had that feeling. My mom always told me to be brave, so I was. I walked pass there like nothing happened yesterday. Nothing happened until everything in my point of view turned black. I had a random flash of a piece of paper hung up on the wall, It was me with the the ¨missing¨ sign. I realized the world I was in was fake and I will never be found again. That was it for me, I just know. Nothing happened it was just black and I was gone because of that church. The end

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