Five Card Story: The Big Cheese

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a Five Card Flickr story by Pablo Vasquez created Nov 08 2023, 05:18:09 pm. Create a new one!


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(Exposition)- The sun was shining bright over Three Choirs Vineyards. Howard and his fiancee Elanor were enjoying of a wine tasting tour. They tried various wines from the vineyard.
(Rising Action)- A man approached Howard with a tray of Buxton Blue cheese. Before Elanor got a chance to try any, Howard devoured the tray of cheese.
(Climax)- Minutes later, Howard felt a sharp, pain in his abdomen. His face began to turn purple and his vision became blurred. As he burst into the bathroom, he noticed the same man who gave him the plate of cheese exit the washroom. This time he was dressed in a black jacket.
(Falling action)- Stumbling out of the bathroom, Howard tried to follow him but his efforts were futile. Howard was alarmed by the sudden ring of a phone next to him. By this point, Howard had lost his vision completely. He crawled toward the sharp ring of the phone.
(Resolution)- Howard picked up the phone and cried for help but was interrupted by the gravely, baritone voice. "Listen to me carefully", said the voice. A long pause followed. " I've been trying to reach you about your cars extended warranty."

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