Five Card Story: Foggy Days Gone Right

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a Five Card Flickr story by Zach Heredia created Nov 17 2023, 03:11:48 pm. Create a new one!

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Exposition - Tommy continued to drive he wouldn't dare let this fog stop him from finally seeing his brother it's been way too long.

Rising Action - At last the fog cleared up and when Tommy glanced to his left he saw his brother's big red house joy then automatically shot into his body.

Climax- Greeted at the door by his brother they both agree upon going to the river and riding the boat like they did as kids wanting to catch up on each other's lives.

Falling Action - When riding throughout the river they spot a certain flower that their long lost mother adored and it brought back so many memories for them. It reminded them how close they all really were before the family split.

Resolution - Although he had a great time with his brother hoping he could stay one day he knew it was time for him to go. His kids and wife were waiting, as he shed a tear he hugged his brother telling him "ill be back one day" he then started to mentally prepare for the 11 hour ride back home.

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