Five Card Story: The Hit

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a Five Card Flickr story by Lucas Hughes created Mar 01 2016, 04:33:49 pm. Create a new one!


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I run hard, trying to escape the defenders. I break through the line, charging ahead as fast as I can, the football safely tucked against my side. Suddenly, BAM!, one of the linemen slam into my side. It feels like I've been hit by a ton of bricks. "Sweet Baby Jesus!" I think as I writhe on the ground, "That hurt!" I shudder as the pain enters my head, feeling like a power tool running through my mind. My head lolls to the side, seeing the natural grass and clovers beside me. I try to stand, but as I tighten the muscles in my side, I feel like I've been struck by lightning. My back arches and the world around me fades to black.

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