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a Five Card Flickr story by Shh their listening created Dec 13 2016, 05:16:27 pm. Create a new one!


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Just wasted my last quarter in the payphone, trying to get help. I have been prancing along the streets of Brooklyn for far too long, and now I'm in danger. I am being watched and no were is safe. I'm scared, I cant think straight. My mind is filled with voices more than I can count. No amount of alcohol could silence my inner demons. I run from everyone and jump at every noise. I feel I cant be saved. I've forgotten how it felt to sleep without the fear of not waking up. I haven't seen my family in weeks, but I can continuously hear their voices. Although I cannot see the eyes that hover I know there always there...watching. The last time I saw my family, they were incredibly distressed. My mind wanders yet my body stays still. I can feel hands. I here the phone ringing, finally relief, but instead of voices I here a long...beep. I am gone.

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