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Five Card Story: Abyss of peace
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Slowly, darkness filled her mind like how clouds covered the sun. It's killing her. "Peace!" She screamed. "I want my peace..." She closed her eyes, and she realized that there's no point of pleading. There's no salvation. No one can save her. Her thoughts are killing her. "I'm sorry..." she sobbed.
Her eyes caught her reflection. A girl beside her bed. It's staring at her with full of tears. "I-I'm sorry..." She hugged herself and the reflection copied her. It became her routine and it turned her to a different person. A dead person. Her face became emotionless. She's alive, but she looks like she's dead. The whistling of the bird filled her ears. She sat silently as she stared at someone who's taking cover from the scorching sun. "You're my light, peace, and calmness..." She whispered. "But you're my downfall." She looked away. The darkness are slowly taking over the sun. "The abyss of my peace."
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