Five Card Story: Is this a curse?

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a Five Card Flickr story by Hakan Cakir created Dec 12 2023, 01:49:12 am. Create a new one!

flickr photo credits: (1) bionicteaching (2) Serenae (3) bionicteaching (4) mcmorgan08 (5) keepps

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Introduction (Pic 1):

One day, we all age like this piece of wood. You can tell it has aged by its dark spots and many rings. People that are old and wrinkly are gross and mean.

(Pic 2):

As of right now, we all look like thus bright yellow/orange tulip who has just shined through on a spring morning. This is what all people should look like all the time, shiny, new, and pretty. Not ugly, old, and nasty. But it was strange, I was so drawn to this flower that I could not take my eyes off of it, I touched it, smelled it, and held it tight.

(Pic 3)

Later the next day, I was walking down this dark sketchy alley. There seemed to be no end, I'm just glad there were no old people to annoy me. Although, I was kind of getting scared, lost, and confused. I saw a rainbow at the end of this dark alley way, so I followed it because people say, "there is gold at the end of the rainbow," and I believe that.

Counterargument (Pic 4):

However, when I walked towards the rainbow, I came out to a grocery store. This was no rainbow, but heaven to me. I could eat and buy anything I want. I felt safe and at home again. But there was one problem. No one could see me. Did I turn invisible? Am I imagining things? Can anyone hear me? This is the strangest event that has ever happened to me. I never though bad things happen to me. I've never done anything wrong, I have never been mean in my life except towards old people because they are mean too.

Conclusion (Pic 5):

I walked out of the grocery store. So sad and confused. I didn't know what to do. So, I tried to help people but they couldn't see me, I tried to speak and say something nice to someone, but they couldn't hear me, I tried to give a nice hug to an older lady, but she couldn't feel me. I walked through this giant puddle and then I saw my own reflection. This means that I can't be invisible anymore because if you're invisible you shouldn't be able to see your own reflection. I went up to the closest person I saw and said, "Hi sir, can you see me?!" and they said, "Yes son now get away from me." This made me the happiest man alive. All of those nice things I tried to do actually worked! I have learned my lesson. will never be mean to anyone ever again, not even older people.

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