Five Card Story: The edge

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" Go into the light! " I felt as if I were floating in space, every part of my body felt as light as a air. The world seemed to stop spinning and time its self seemed to stop. I felt a calming feeling like as if I were never coming down, when my body was smashed with the weight of a train crashing against me. " Johnny! Johnny! " I couldn't move my body was stuck in the middle of the car roof and the wet forest floor. " Johnny!" I herd the hurrying of feet coming closer. Then I saw her, trying to call out her name the only thing that came out was a ruff cough. I saw the cliff edge that the car had run off and behind it the sun was setting the sky filled up with a pink glow, soon it would be dark. "Oh, Johnny!" She finally found me and crouched down by my side. " I'm so sorry. I shouldn't of waved at you right on the sharp turn." I gave her a smile cause that was all i could do. " There's no service down here, I have to go up the hill to call for help, are you going to be ok?" I tried to nod but my head wouldn't move, breathing was getting hard and harder to do. " I'll be right back." and she ran off. The feeling of total helplessness made me made, but there was nothing I could do, so I just laid there. It was getting darker and right when my mind was going to that place were I didn't want it to go, I herd her calling. " Johnny there're here! There're here!" Then I herd the helicopter and that was the sweetest sound I had ever herd.

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<hr /><h2><a href="http://5card.cogdogblog.com/show.php?id=37099">Five Card Story: The edge </a></h2>a <a href="http://5card.cogdogblog.com/show.php?suit=5card">Five Card Flickr</a> story created by Viivi 
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 " Go into the light! " I felt as if I were floating in space, every part of my body felt as light as a air. The world seemed to stop spinning and time its self seemed to stop. I felt a calming feeling like as if I were never coming down, when my body was smashed with the weight of a train crashing against me. " Johnny! Johnny! " I couldn't move my body was stuck in the middle of the car roof and the wet forest floor. " Johnny!" I herd the hurrying of feet coming closer. Then I saw her, trying to call out her name the only thing that came out was a ruff cough. I saw the cliff edge that the car had run off and behind it the sun was setting the sky filled up with a pink glow, soon it would be dark. "Oh, Johnny!" She finally found me and crouched down by my side. " I'm so sorry. I shouldn't of waved at you right on the sharp turn." I gave her a smile cause that was all i could do. " There's no service down here, I have to go up the hill to call for help, are you going to be ok?" I tried to nod but my head wouldn't move, breathing was getting hard and harder to do. " I'll be right back." and she ran off. The feeling of total helplessness made me made, but there was nothing I could do, so I just laid there. It was getting darker and right when my mind was going to that place were I didn't want it to go, I herd her calling. " Johnny there're here! There're here!" Then I herd the helicopter and that was the sweetest sound I had ever herd. 
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