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a Five Card Flickr story by Safiya (っ＾▿＾) っ♡ created Mar 30 2022, 06:40:11 am. Create a new one!

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{Warning non of these are based in real life}

Once a Upon a time, a happy family was gathering for their family reunion close at the woods near an d prison and a mental hospital where edward's house was.Here is billy! He is Porcha and Edward's son. Today he was very excited to meet his favorite cousins,(john,mark,jay and fred).They met each other at billy's backyard,They were chatting all day on how excited they were to meet billy and his parents they were also permitted to stay in billy's house for 5 days. Billy and his cousins sat down at his bed and while they're chatting,John noticed a picture from billy's room he said,

John: Hey bill who's this in your picture frame?

Billy: What picture?

John pointed out an old picture of a man with 3 guards at the back. Billy responded

Billy: Oh you mean that? Well.. when i was very young my dad told me to look around at the basement when we first moved.. Actually its been a week since we moved.. this house is still brand new to me and its also why we decided to celebrate here!

Mark: but why was that picture in your basement?

Billy: the old owner must have left it here but its probably precious to the owner so i kept it!

Soon they moved on the conversation...billy's mom shouted "Kids the food is here". They ran downstairs to eat and to get back to bed early.

{ Midnight }
At the midnight billy,john,mark,jay and fred were talking about horror stories they were getting deeper and deeper... fred started tearing up because of the story they were telling. Everyone laughed at fred for crying, Fred looked out of the window to get fresh air after crying.. he saw a man at the wood paths. He called his cousins to come and see the man, Soon the man was gone. Everyone doubted him for trying to scare them as for comeback awhile ago.. fred shouted

Fred: I WAS NOT LYING!! HE WAS DRESSED WITH WHITE VEST AND DARK SHIRT INSIDE, HE HAD LONG BUSHY HAIR WITH BAGGY PANTS.. HEY LOOK! ITS THE MAN I SAW!!

Fred pointed at billy's picture, They dint believed fred because they thought fred was trying to fool them.. the next morning they woke up and took their early meal, They asked billy's mom if they could wander in the forest for a time.

Billy's mom (porcha):
Alright, But you kids shouldn't go beyond the gates!

The kids were happy, They searched in the woods and fred said,

Fred: Hey.. dont go there.. there was a man in there..

Billy: Fred please stop trying to fool us! Just because you were a scaredy cat last night, Move on lets search!

After a long time of searching they were finding mushrooms, animals and more insects. They caught black butterfly flying around the forest, they wanted to catch it. After following it they were going in the forest deeper deeper.. and deeper.. They saw a something buried in the ground while following the butterfly, they saw a dark pouch. They took it and looked whats inside, they saw money and jewelry... as expected to kids they immediately took it home.. As on their way home they saw Porcha running, They thought she was going to lead them at home. Instead... they were brought to a gate and wondered where porcha has come, they remembered

"You kids shouldn't go beyond the gates" ...they were naughty.. They tried entering it by climbing up the walls to know whats inside as their curiosity leaded them to a big.. big problem. They all got in the forest and saw an abandoned building, As they get closer.. closer.. and closer.. they felt like something was wrong, They checked at their back they saw fred was gone, they were worried and they were trying to look for fred, They tried searching everywhere the kids said,

Jay: FRED IF YOU ARE PRANKING US THIS IS NOT FUNNY COME BACK!!

Billy: HEY DONT SCREAM MY MOM MIGHT HEAR US!

Mark: COME ON WE GOT NO CHOICE BUT TO FIND FRED..

John: GUYS What if we leave for a while... fred probably came back to bill's house because he was too scared..

They agreed with john and they came home.. Billy's mom asked

Billy's mom (Porcha):
Hey how was the ventures!

They said: It was great!!

Billy:also mom.. have you seen fred come back home?

Billy's mom (Porcha):
I thought he was with you billy?..

Billy: he left us actually ... in the forest.. we dont know where he came.. we tried searching for him everywhere..

Billy's mom (Porcha):
Where did you guys last see him?

John: At the gat-

Mark: OH WE SAW HIM LAST AT THE.. THE.. AT BILLY'S BACKYARD

Billy's mom (Porcha):
Mark is there anything wrong?

Jay: no... mrs porcha.. he is probably still playing outside..

Billy's mom (Porcha):
Alright.. i see.. Anyways boys, Why are you covered with dirt? Take a bath right away.

{ evening }
Fred was not in the house yet.. billy's parents and fred's parents got curious then they tried looking for fred in the backyard.. they found nothing.. the next night billy heard someone crying, He asked his cousins to check who it thats crying... They saw fred's mom.. they immediately felt bad for fred's mom...they made a plan

Billy: So listen, We are going to find fred..

Mark: when?

Billy: right now.

Jay: ARE YOU CRAZY?! AT NIGHT? DO YOU WANT TO BE LIKE FRED? OR WHAT EVER HAPPENED TO FRED?

Billy: Jay listen.. do you even feel bad about making fred's parents worry? Listen.. we have to find fred.. no matter what time..

John was very tired of billy and jay's argue, he took a breath at the window. He saw a man just like what fred mentioned, He alerted his cousins

John: ITS WHAT FRED SAW!! GUYS ITS THE GUY!!

Billy: IT WAS REAL??

jay: GUYS PLEASE DONT GO OUT TO FIND FOR FRED

Mark: NO ITS ACTUALLY OUR CHANCE! HE MIGHT BE THE CULPRIT OF WHY FRED WAS LOST

Billy: Mark is right.. we should go try to find him to know where fred was..

After going out at the night time they followed the man's foot prints and it was leading at the gates.. they encountered it once again.. They saw a kid same hight as fred in the church window, They knew that man did it to fred. Once again they have gotten close in the gates they heard john's scream They tried finding for john.. there were foot prints leading somewhere.. they saw a tree, An apple fell into billy's head.. then more apples fell... They tried catching all the apples to prevent making loud noises. An 'apple' fell into Jay's hand and it was red a very red apple with a sculpture of.. John's head they scram and ran away from the forest.. later morning billy's parents and others were a sleep.. billy, John and jay was traumatized.. Billy said.

Billy: COME ON WE SHOULD CHECK AGAIN.. MAYBE MARK'S NOT YET DEAD..

Jay: DINT YOU SEE JOHN'S HEAD THAT WAS RIPPED APART AND FELL INTO MY HANDS?

Mark: i get it.. if we see the man once.. we will die next..

Billy: you are right.. what if.. we cover our windows at night...

Jay: right.. good point.. but aren't you guys bothered that.. 2 of us are dead?.. john.. fred..

Billy: lets just pretend to our parents that john tried searching for fred.. then he got lost..

Mark: you are right. Lets try that..

As soon as billy's, Fred's, John's, mark's and jay's parents were awake. They asked the kids to go downstairs to eat breakfast, They asked where john was.. They replied with the excuse they planned a while ago, john's parents were doomed. They tried searching for john and fred but it got worse.. john's parents tried calling the cops to arrest billy, jay and mark they said they did nothing then after a while they were still worrying.. Once again..
Its now midnight...

Jay was covering up the windows and felt like something or someone was watching he took a look at the window and saw the man. He immediately closed it and he was worried, he dint tell billy and mark about it so they moved on..
They took a rest after locking up their windows. Soon... billy woke up and was bothered by something.. it was getting close.. closer and billy woke up sweating.. he looked at the side of his bed.. the man's picture..

Billy: Why is it here... Mark stop playing games.. dont prank me like that.. he saw mark was sleeping, he placed the picture where it was supposed to be, He turned around seeing john's head. He screamed, Mark got up to check what happened to billy and said

Mark: WHATS WRONG?

Billy: JOHN'S HEAD!!!!

Mark: WHERE?!

Billy: .. its gone.. i was probably hallucinating.. hey mark wake up i want to drink water downstairs..

Mark: sure..

They got downstairs and suspected nothing, They avoided looking outside the window and after drinking they got bothered that there's something on the trees, They took a looked.. it was someone.. someone was h^nged in the trees.. they saw jay they ran into their rooms and saw jay was gone.. they saw a note telling them,

"I will stop k^lling your dear family... but if you go back to check on the forest.."

Billy: COME ON MARK WE DONT WANT OUR PARENTS TO BE INVOLVED WITH THIS..

Mark: YOU ARE RIGHT.. LETS GO..

They got on the gates and saw someone in the abandoned building.. They got in to confront that man and they had the guts to talk to him

Mark: HEY YOU OLD FREAK STOP KILLING OUR COUSINS WHAT DID WE EVEN DO TO YOU?

Billy: HES RIGHT WHAT DID WE DO TO YOU? I JUST KEPT A PICTURE OF YOU NOW YOU ARE HAUNTING US WHATS WRONG WITH YOU?

The man looked at them in a frighting way.. the man's skin got lose and he said

???: You guys.. are.. the ones who humiliated me and told me that i was being a scaredy cat because i cant handle nightmares and stories. Now i made a worse nightmare for you. Billy.

The man was revealed to be fred and after he was exposed billy and mark tried to run but fell into the old building's trap and fred threw a thousand needles into the trap and filled it with gasoline and burnt the 2 boys alive.

Fred: Who is the scaredy cats now?


— beyond the gates —

By: Safiya (○`^`○)




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